[emaline29]

Another one written many moons ago when at a low ebb but very descriptive.

Loneliness

Can anybody see the sky
And can they hear the wind?
It's cold and lonely in the park
And noone can I find.

The days drift into months and years
The trees are changing too.
Can anybody see the sky?
It's lost it's radiant hue.

The wind it blows acroos my face
And cuts into my cheek.
Can anybody hear the wind?
It's never been so bleak.

Can anybody see or hear
The cries of pain and sorrow?
Or will the many turn their heads
"We'll think of that tomorrow!"

Can anybody give a word
To calm the restless night
And soothe this aching heart of mine
Before I lose the fight.

For life is love - to love is life
And little there is left.
If only I could see the sky
But darkness o'er me crept.

And if I could but hear the wind
That breathes thro'out the day
But all I know is what I felt
And love has gone away.

So numbed that hardly can I speak
And sit alone would I.
Can anybody hear the wind
And can they see the sky?

[hippy27]

I really love your poetry...quite beautiful. Keep sharing!

[maryea]

Yes your poems are lovely! I can feel the loneliness in this poem. I hope you are feeling better now. God loves you and He has blessed you with a wonderful gift in your poetry. Thanks for sharing.

[Thighs Be Gone]

That is beautiful. I really like it. I hope you don't mind if I cut and save it.

[Everlasting]

That is lovely work; so moving it actually teared me up!

[AuntBea]

I have cut and pasted this so I can re-read it. This is so stunning, Emaline. Thank you for sharing. I can relate to this but would never be able to express it like this.

[emaline29]

Thankyou all for your comments. Feel quite chuffed at your responses. Bless you all.