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Old 06-15-2011, 02:08 AM   #3
Serval87
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It's very interesting. It reminds me of a fairytale (not one if particular, just a fairytale itself), because it sounds like it will end with a nice moral. I really enjoyed your writing style, especially in the dialogue. If you really want good feedback I suggest posting it on storywrite.com.
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