
It looks like you could use a lot more veggies, unless you're eating 4 cups of spinach at dinnertime. And you should try to get 2 cups of dairy (not including cheese) in there, too, to balance your diet.
As for a place for critiquing your menu, we have an On-Plan Thread where you could post it and probably get a lot of helpful suggestions.
Good luck, and we're looking forward to getting to know you!