Update: I have done some serious editing! It's almost finished. The offer certainly still stands, though.

Sheila: I'll FOR SURE be sending you another copy... I think you're going to be impressed with the changes.

Sure. Thought you were already accepted, though??

I'd love to read it. I may not get to it until Wednesday though with having to leave early today and tomorrow being my busy day.

Apryl, I'm not sure where you are stuck at because I thought it was perfect. It gave me chills at the end. The writing is absolutely great!!!