A challenge to all who like to write poetry!

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  • Lizziness, your "Routine Lives" is really excellent... I'm sure you got more stuff that should see the light of day Diseases that ooze from fingertips like smog... and all those identical stylized families... very cool imagery.

    I looked up online some of your favorite poets/poetry, thanks for sharing! I'm such a dork, that was the first time I really read Ginsberg!

    Drug use never really inspired me either. Though I remember trying to write a coherant "lab report" on the use of acid one night, while tripping. Wonder where that got to, ha! Probably lost in one of my moves. Or not... Boy, if I ever get hit by a truck or something, my family is going to have some interesting reading at their fingertips.

    A few of my favorites are Pablo Neruda, Rumi, Mary Oliver. I really need to get back into exploring poetry. I got books just crying out to be read! Oh, and I love haiku too, so thank you Solar for yours!

    Solar, the Deerfield archaeology dig was at the E.H. Williams home site. Have not seen the hermit holes, your "sweat lodge" theory sounds very reasonable though
  • Okay, you gals have inspired me to share some of my own. I wrote this one many years ago when I was high on love. Now, I'm just a cynical "spinster" but I think it's still my favorite work.

    "Grow Old with Me"
    Stay beside me
    Hold my hand
    Walk along through this troubled world
    Hold me
    Kiss me
    Always keep me safe
    Together
    Two of us
    Who knows what the future holds
    Family
    Wealth
    Dreams come true
    Rocking chairs
    Front porches
    A home of our own someday
    Babies
    Grandkids
    Waking up to you every morning
    Sickness & Health
    And wrinkles
    But you're still gorgeous
    In my heart
    In my soul
    You'll always be
    Love me
    Til the end of time...

    Grow old with me
  • That's lovely, Becqris. Thank you for sharing it with us.

    Sarah... Gold in Darkness is very cool.
  • A little bit 'o Pablo Neruda for this Sunday...
    Ok, this isn't one of mine, but I love his imagery. His love poetry is stunningly gorgeous also, very tender and full of knowing details.

    This is from Full Woman, Fleshly Apple, Hot Moon, translated by Stephen Mitchell. Nice copy since it has the English translation on one side and Neruda's original Spanish on the other.

    Some Beasts
    (from Canto General)

    It was the twilight of the iguana.

    From the rainbow-arched battlements
    his tongue like a dart
    plunged into the greenness,
    the monastic ant-swarm walked
    through the jungle with melodious feet,
    the guanaco, thin as oxygen
    in the wide gray heights,
    moved wearing boots of gold,
    while the llama opened his guileless
    eyes in the transparency
    of a world filled with dew.
    The monkeys braided a thread
    endlessly erotic
    along the shores of the dawn,
    demolishing walls of pollen
    and scaring off the violet flight
    of the butterflies of Muzo.
    It was the night of the alligators,
    the night pure and pullulating
    with snouts emerging from the slime,
    and out of the sleepy marshes
    an opaque noise of armor
    returned to the earth it came from.

    The jaguar touched the leaves
    with his phosphorescent absence,
    the puma runs on the branches
    like a devouring fire
    while inside him burn
    the jungle's alcoholic eyes.

    The badgers scratch the feet
    of the river, sniff out the nest
    whose throbbing delight
    they'll attack with red teeth.

    And in the depths of the all-powerful water,
    like the circle of the earth,
    lies the giant anaconda,
    covered with ritual mud,
    devouring and religious.