Please rate and review my story!
 

It's the first story I've been paid for, and it's finally put up on the site. http://www.untiedshoelacesofthemind....ue5/satine.php Thanks!

ooouuuu! I liked it! Is there going to be more?

I enjoyed your story. Makes me wonder what happens next. You have an excellent way of describing things so that I could see them in my head as I read along. :)

Thanks everyone! I'm in the process of writing a second part, but I don't know if it will be good enough to publish.