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Old 10-29-2005, 08:59 PM   #1  
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Talking Very OT: Help me w/ college essay

Update: I have done some serious editing! It's almost finished. The offer certainly still stands, though.

Sheila: I'll FOR SURE be sending you another copy... I think you're going to be impressed with the changes.

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Old 10-29-2005, 10:18 PM   #2  
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Sure. Thought you were already accepted, though??
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I'd love to read it. I may not get to it until Wednesday though with having to leave early today and tomorrow being my busy day.
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Apryl, I'm not sure where you are stuck at because I thought it was perfect. It gave me chills at the end. The writing is absolutely great!!!
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