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missaprylj
10-29-2005, 08:59 PM
Update: I have done some serious editing! It's almost finished. The offer certainly still stands, though. ;)

Sheila: I'll FOR SURE be sending you another copy... I think you're going to be impressed with the changes. :yes: :D


Sheila53
10-29-2005, 10:18 PM
Sure. Thought you were already accepted, though??

barbygirl43
10-31-2005, 12:04 PM
I'd love to read it. I may not get to it until Wednesday though with having to leave early today and tomorrow being my busy day.


barbygirl43
11-03-2005, 10:29 AM
Apryl, I'm not sure where you are stuck at because I thought it was perfect. It gave me chills at the end. The writing is absolutely great!!!