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Old 09-22-2011, 01:17 AM   #1  
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Talking Please rate and review my story!
It's the first story I've been paid for, and it's finally put up on the site. http://www.untiedshoelacesofthemind....ue5/satine.php Thanks!
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ooouuuu! I liked it! Is there going to be more?
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I enjoyed your story. Makes me wonder what happens next. You have an excellent way of describing things so that I could see them in my head as I read along.
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Thanks everyone! I'm in the process of writing a second part, but I don't know if it will be good enough to publish.
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