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Serval87
09-22-2011, 01:17 AM
It's the first story I've been paid for, and it's finally put up on the site. http://www.untiedshoelacesofthemind.com/Issue5/satine.php Thanks!


Rainbowgirl
09-22-2011, 03:13 AM
ooouuuu! I liked it! Is there going to be more?

EagleRiverDee
09-22-2011, 07:19 PM
I enjoyed your story. Makes me wonder what happens next. You have an excellent way of describing things so that I could see them in my head as I read along. :)


Serval87
09-22-2011, 09:17 PM
Thanks everyone! I'm in the process of writing a second part, but I don't know if it will be good enough to publish.