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Old 07-27-2006, 07:12 AM   #1
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Hey everyone... I used to write poetry all the time, mostly about love issues. I recently wrote one about being overweight and I thought I'd share...

Trapped in a prison
Will I ever be free?
The worst part is
The warden is me

Hiding inside
These self imposed walls
Wishing to be like
A Barbie Doll

Perfect and pretty
So proper and prim
Not flawed and heavy
But happy and thin

Just some of my thoughts. Feel free to critique! Have a great day everyone!

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Old 07-27-2006, 08:11 AM   #2
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Great poem Sarah, Thanks for sharing.
I know that I often feel imprisoned by this shell of a body. One of these days my sentence will be up and I hope this is true for you as well.

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Old 07-27-2006, 10:53 AM   #3
oh to be this graceful
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Sarah, wonderful poem thank you for sharing, and all too true.
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Old 07-27-2006, 04:19 PM   #4
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The worst part is the warden is me! Wow I need to take control and set me free! Good insight.
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Old 07-27-2006, 10:10 PM   #5
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I love it!
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Old 07-27-2006, 10:52 PM   #6
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Great poem. I used to write poetry too, but you are very brave to post it and I love it and it is very insiteful.

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